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Richal Persuasive Essay

February 11, 2010


 Richal                                                                                         February 9, 2010
                                                     No Smoking
    Please read my Persuasive Essay!!!    
           People should not to smoke and your lungs can get black. If you do not smoke cigarettes you will have more money in your pocket.
    I believe that people should not smoke because it is bad for them. Your family can die from smoking and your friends too.  It is bad to smoke.  Say to your friends to not smoke.  Try to save your friends because friends are special.  
   I believe that people should not smoke.  I get nervous when my aunt is smoking because she get could cancer. My aunt buys a pack of cigarettes every day. She is wasting all her money that she works hard for, she is wasting all of her money on smoking. I get angry when my aunt  smokes because I feel bad when somebody in my family smokes because my family is important.  Family is like the best people in the world. When you smoke your lungs turn black, you can not breath, and you will die.   I saw on TV that a girl lost half of her foot and some of her fingers she does not smoke any more but the damage is done.
           PLEASE DON’T SMOKE!!!       

3 Comments leave one →
  1. msabodeelyclass permalink
    February 11, 2010 4:48 pm

    You are true Richal

    By Luis

  2. msabodeelyclass permalink
    February 11, 2010 4:58 pm

    Dear Richal,
    I believe that there should be no smoking. I agree with you.

  3. Ms. Cohen permalink
    March 25, 2010 12:11 am

    Hi Richal,

    You are right! Smoking is an unhealthy thing to do. Maybe you can try to help your Aunt quit, or stop smoking. Each time she wants to smoke a cigarette, read a book to her instead! You wrote a wonderful essay! Keep up the good work!

    From, Ms. Cohen

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