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There should be more food shelters in the world By Jessica

February 9, 2010

Jessica                                                                                                      February 4, 2010

Food Shelters

Do you want to stop seeing people on the street, and stop having your loved ones die because of hunger?  If you answered yes, then I suggest you read my persuasive essay to find out how to prevent those things from happening.  The way to prevent  your loved ones from dying of hunger, I believe that we should build more food shelters!
I believe that there should be more food shelters in the world because “
One person every other second needlessly dies of hunger. Approximately 85% of them are children.” (Starvation.net). We spend too much money on terrisioum than food. That is why I believe that we should build more  food shelters! For example, my dad’s friend died because he was home less, and  he was not eating. Another example is I used to see this lady and she was always on the street and she never had money to buy food and then a couple months later, I saw her get very skiny  and not long after that she died.


I believe that there should be more food shelters in the world because people will eat, they won’t die, and whenever there is a job offer the people that are in the food shelters will probably be right there for the job.  For example, whenever I go to my friend Lora’s house as I am walking down the block of her house, I see this man with a sign and the sign says free for a job.  If he does not have a job, he probably does not have food.  A food shelter will help him eat food.
I believe that there should be more food shelters in the world because you will see less people on the street because they are all probably going to the food shelters to eat.  For example, I know this man that used to live near my neighborhood and sometimes he didn’t eat.  There used to be a food shelter he used to go to for breakfast, lunch, and dinner but it shut down and he looked for food shelters.  He never found one it so maybe if there were more food shelters in the world you won’t see him on the streets.  I know this because when there used to be a food shelter, he used to spend hours there.
I have gave you 3 expanding reasons on why you should build a food shelter so I encourage you to make the right decision and build a food shelter!  I hope I gave you 3 terrific  reasons on why you should build a food shelter!  I also hope that those were very convincing that I have convinced you to build a food shelter.  If you have made the right decision and build a food shelter, if you or your loved ones are ever homeless without any money you are safe from starving because you or someone else build a food shelter!
Sad Fact

Every year 15 million children die of food hunger.



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3 Comments leave one →
  1. msabodeelyclass permalink
    February 11, 2010 4:55 pm

    Dear Jessica,
    this is really good and I believe that there should be more food shelters.
    From:Chiara

  2. msabodeelyclass permalink
    February 11, 2010 5:11 pm

    Jessica u forgot to intend

    BY LUIS

  3. February 12, 2010 12:50 am

    Luis is right b/c you did not indent.
    From: Chiara M

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