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Joanne PersuasiveEssay

February 9, 2010

Joanne                                                                         February 5, 2010

Deserving an iPod
        I wrote a persuasive essay and I want YOU TO READ IT! This persuasive essay is  about a girl named Joanne and she really wants an iPod from her mom.  She would do anything to get it from her mom.  That Joanne is the writer of this persuasive.  You have to listen to this persuasive essay.  
    I want an ipod because I help my mom with cleaning stuff like the mirrors .  I 

 

help my mom every day.  I clean  the floors, windows, and bathroom.  I am doing a good job at home and I love my jobs at home.  That why I really want my mom to buy me an iPod.  
    I deserve an iPod because I listen in school and do my homework. I  do everything The image “https://i2.wp.com/aestheticlab.com/kenji/wp-content/uploads/2008/02/ipod-touch2.jpg” cannot be displayed, because it contains errors.I can do.  I help with things like cleaning the classroom. I do all my math and writing. I also have an important  job.  It is passing out the computers it is a big job. I love my job its so cool.
    I want a Ipod because I do all my homework.  I do lot of things.  I even save my money and gave it to my mom. I hope I can get an Ipod with her help. 

    In conclusion, I want an ipod  because I  do my homework  and I do my math and writing  and other stuff.  A girl named Joanne really wants a ipod.  Lets hope she gets it!


      
              


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3 Comments leave one →
  1. msabodeelyclass permalink
    February 11, 2010 5:14 pm

    That’s not an i pod that’s a i pod touch see the diffrence

    BY LUIS

  2. February 12, 2010 12:52 am

    Hi Joanne! The picture that you have on the P E is an iPod touch not an iPod!!!!!!!!
    From: Chiara M

  3. February 12, 2010 12:53 am

    Oh by the way, the picture is way too big!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    From: Chiara M

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