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destiny persuasive essay

February 9, 2010
Destiny                                                                                              February 5, 2010   
Animals Should  Survive                          
     Would you like to see animals survive? Before I saw dog owners giving the creature a treat if they did the trick right and if their animal did not, they would say “Try again boy!”NOW THAT’S A GOOD WAY TO TREAT YOUR DOGS! So if you want  someone to persuade you about taking care of animals, you should read my persuasive essay!
    Instead of putting stray animals in shelters you should take them home and treat them well, because if you are there seeing the stray creature being treated badly you will feel badly for putting the animals in shelters, but if you like seeing the animals suffer that’s sick!  Once I saw a commercial that had cats and dogs with one eye, with diseases, and with 3 legs.  I felt really bad when saw that commercial.
     If you see an animal shelter you should adopt a pet so the living creature will survive.   Since there isn’t much that you can do after the chicken bones have been ingested by your dog, you simply need to monitor him closely for the next few days.Keep checking his stools to see if the bones pass. Watch for blood in the stool, or any signs that he’s straining to defecate.

You should also keep an eye on your dog’s temperament. If he becomes moody or listless, take him to a vet immediately.

Perhaps the best thing you can do is try to “cushion” the tiny bones inside your dog’s tummy by overfeeding him a little more over the next couple of days. Cooked rice (that’s completely cooled first) is ideal, because it is gentle on a dog’s stomach and digestive tract. You could serve up a small helping of plain white rice alone, or mix some cooked rice in with your dog’s normal dog food.

For example dog, cats, snakes, hamsters, bunnies, fish, water dragons, and lizards  get killed by the shelters. The shelters that don’t kill animals are very wise and love animals.    

      You should not hurt animals because it can be used for useful things like watch dogs if you are blind it can take you were you want to  go.  Animals can be very useful and loving.  
                                                    TIPS FOR  DOGS!
     If you get a dog always give her or him shots so if he/she bits a person the person won’t get rabies .You can not give the animal a chicken bone because it can chock.Think before you do things.      
    In conclusion, I believe that people should stop hurting our animals.Do you want to see animals survive.

    He or she wants to go home to its daddy.

    She and he wants to go home to its mommy.
3 Comments leave one →
  1. msabodeelyclass permalink
    February 11, 2010 5:16 pm



  2. February 12, 2010 12:58 am

    Those puppies look sad!!! Awhhh!!!

  3. February 12, 2010 5:12 pm

    Dear Destiny,
    I feel sad for those puppies. Awhhh!!!!
    From: Chiara M

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