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Crystal persuasive essay

February 9, 2010

Crystal                                                                                         February 5,2010                  

                                                        I love Guinea Pigs

       Hi my name is Crystal and I am eight years old.  I want to know if you have a guinea pig because I don’t have one.  If you do can you tell me all about your guinea pig. My mom should buy me a guinea pig.  They’re so cute.  I deserve to have one or two guinea pig.        
      My mom should buy me a guinea pig because I’m good and I’m good at school. I will take good care of it. I will feed it every day.  I will let it play around.  I will take it for a little walk in my house when my dog is on his walk. I will take it for a walk just in case it gets board. I will not let any one play with my pet.  I will not lave the cage open when I am not home.  I will not make any loud sound because they don’t like loud sounds.  I will be the one who will take care of it no one else should  but me, and my mom and dad.                     
       My mom should buy me a guinea pig because I will not let my dog do anything to it.  I will give it lots of love, care , food, and water.  I will not forget to give it food, water, love, and care.  I will clean its cage every day.  I will be the responsible taking care of it.  I am going to name it what ever  want.  I will be nice to it and make sure it is not sick.                   

        My mom should buy me a guinea pig because I am good to pets.  I will buy the stuff it needs and make a new home for it!  I will be nice to it and get one or two friends.  I will make sure it has food, water and all the stuff it needs.  I will not let it get sick or starve or not get the amount of water it needs. I will not let the cage open when I am not at home or school or at my dads house.  I will not let it come out of the cage when I am eating, sleeping, at school, or at the park.                             

      I believe my mom should buy me a guinea pig.  I should get a guinea pig as my birthday gift.  I  believe I should have a guinea pig.  I should have a guinea pig for my birthday or a Christmas gift.  I should have a guinea pig for a pet.  I should have a guinea pig for a gift or just a pet.

                                                       http://www.nhn.ou.edu/~jeffery/course/c_energy/energyl/lec003/guinea_pig_001.jpg

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4 Comments leave one →
  1. msabodeelyclass permalink
    February 9, 2010 5:22 pm

    Boooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  2. msabodeelyclass permalink
    February 9, 2010 5:22 pm

    Dear Crystal,
    your pictuer is so AWESOME WHEN I LOOKED AT IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    LOVE,
    CRYSTAL

  3. msabodeelyclass permalink
    February 9, 2010 5:24 pm

    DEAR Crystal,

    I think ur p.e is very convincing.

  4. chiara permalink
    February 12, 2010 5:15 pm

    The g. Pigs are soooooooooooo cute!!!!!
    Chiara

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