Looking at Persuasive Essays (Quick Publish)
Let’s take a look at one student’s persuasive essay. Look for the things on our list that we said we needed to include: 1) What did this student do well? 2) What can this student do to improve his/her essay?
I am a contributing member of our classroom community because I alway show respect, I want to learn and I help people. Here are some exsples.
I show respect, I help people pick up there thing like notebook, bookbag, and chair. If they need help. I show maner, and I show myself being a good kid.
I learn because I alway pay attention to my teacher Mrs. Caputo, because she tell us some thing inportant.
I help kid pay attentant to Mrs. Caputo for they could be smart and be helpfull.
I want everybody just like me for they could be smart, helpfull and show respect. So are you happy to have me in your classroom