Joanne PersuasiveEssay
February 9, 2010
Joanne February 5, 2010
Deserving an iPod
I wrote a persuasive essay and I want YOU TO READ IT! This persuasive essay is about a girl named Joanne and she really wants an iPod from her mom. She would do anything to get it from her mom. That Joanne is the writer of this persuasive. You have to listen to this persuasive essay.
I want an ipod because I help my mom with cleaning stuff like the mirrors . I
I want an ipod because I help my mom with cleaning stuff like the mirrors . I
help my mom every day. I clean the floors, windows, and bathroom. I am doing a good job at home and I love my jobs at home. That why I really want my mom to buy me an iPod.
I deserve an iPod because I listen in school and do my homework. I do everything 
I can do. I help with things like cleaning the classroom. I do all my math and writing. I also have an important job. It is passing out the computers it is a big job. I love my job its so cool.
I can do. I help with things like cleaning the classroom. I do all my math and writing. I also have an important job. It is passing out the computers it is a big job. I love my job its so cool. I want a Ipod because I do all my homework. I do lot of things. I even save my money and gave it to my mom. I hope I can get an Ipod with her help.
In conclusion, I want an ipod because I do my homework and I do my math and writing and other stuff. A girl named Joanne really wants a ipod. Lets hope she gets it!
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That’s not an i pod that’s a i pod touch see the diffrence
BY LUIS
Hi Joanne! The picture that you have on the P E is an iPod touch not an iPod!!!!!!!!
From: Chiara M
Oh by the way, the picture is way too big!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
From: Chiara M