Crystal persuasive essay
February 9, 2010
Crystal February 5,2010
I love Guinea Pigs
Hi my name is Crystal and I am eight years old. I want to know if you have a guinea pig because I don’t have one. If you do can you tell me all about your guinea pig. My mom should buy me a guinea pig. They’re so cute. I deserve to have one or two guinea pig.
My mom should buy me a guinea pig because I’m good and I’m good at school. I will take good care of it. I will feed it every day. I will let it play around. I will take it for a little walk in my house when my dog is on his walk. I will take it for a walk just in case it gets board. I will not let any one play with my pet. I will not lave the cage open when I am not home. I will not make any loud sound because they don’t like loud sounds. I will be the one who will take care of it no one else should but me, and my mom and dad.
My mom should buy me a guinea pig because I will not let my dog do anything to it. I will give it lots of love, care , food, and water. I will not forget to give it food, water, love, and care. I will clean its cage every day. I will be the responsible taking care of it. I am going to name it what ever want. I will be nice to it and make sure it is not sick.
My mom should buy me a guinea pig because I am good to pets. I will buy the stuff it needs and make a new home for it! I will be nice to it and get one or two friends. I will make sure it has food, water and all the stuff it needs. I will not let it get sick or starve or not get the amount of water it needs. I will not let the cage open when I am not at home or school or at my dads house. I will not let it come out of the cage when I am eating, sleeping, at school, or at the park.
I believe my mom should buy me a guinea pig. I should get a guinea pig as my birthday gift. I believe I should have a guinea pig. I should have a guinea pig for my birthday or a Christmas gift. I should have a guinea pig for a pet. I should have a guinea pig for a gift or just a pet.
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Boooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dear Crystal,
your pictuer is so AWESOME WHEN I LOOKED AT IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVE,
CRYSTAL
DEAR Crystal,
I think ur p.e is very convincing.
The g. Pigs are soooooooooooo cute!!!!!
Chiara