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BrianB., Persuasive Essay #2

January 6, 2010
by Mr. McRae's Class

Let Me Coach You


John, you should let me coach you because… you always tell me to do whatever you want to. You tell me to play soccer until I get better at it , play basketball, and to make a goal on my cousin. If you can’t do great in soccer you tell me to help you.

When you forgot to play basketball you told me to teach you again and when you don’t feel like going against our cousin Kelvin you tell me to face him. I can coach you to bat balls in baseball, I taught you how to shoot in basketball. I taught you how to kick high in soccer and I taught you how to swing the racket in tennis. I could make you better at soccer by training you to run and kick.

I could help you with your basketball jumping high. I could help you hit the ball in ping-pong. I could help you throw the volleyball over the net and to catch good in football. I can help you with you run fast to the base in baseball and I could help you with your tricks in soccer. I will help you a lot.


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